International Photographers Association of Los Angeles 洛杉磯國際攝影家協會

Okay Yu Hong.... in my opinion, you've done fine. Location is fine, your lighting is fine, and the colors are fine. The angle from which you shot is also fine. I like the Victoria Secret sign in the background. Her dress color is very nice and it matches the color of the sign. I would much rather see her in a Victoria Secret lingerie though, to match the whole feel of the picture (of course not possible to put her in a lingerie in a public place).

Although all the technical stuff described above is important, the most important part should be the humanistic aspect of this picture. How is she portrayed. When I see this picture, will I like her, will I fall madly in love with her. That's the focus. Make her look irresistible, and make her look like every man's fantasy.

The main issue: model..... 面部表情生硬, 眼睛沒有靈魂。 Model 完全沒有進入情況。 也許她很緊張。 如果她的頭髮波浪一些然後加厚，她會看著好很多。她的妝應該化的更有戲劇性 (dramatic) to match her mini dress. This is an evening look, so the hair and make-up should match the evening feel (sassy and sexy).

I hope I haven't offended anybody by posting this.

我看第一第二张怎么也要两个灯吧，还要大光圈镜头。

当天现场快二十个人，找个合适的机位都很难，更别说布灯，指导pose了。mm不进入状态我可以理解。

可以理解。
所以拍的时候人不能太多。
沙龙应该鼓励2，3个人的主题拍摄计划。没被邀的gg，mm们不要生气，不要认为是不仗义。
但拍后的片子和经验要共享，要“拍来拍去”，沙龙才会有个人和整体的进步。

Okay Yu Hong.... in my opinion, you've done fine. Location is fine, your lighting is fine, and the colors are fine. The angle from which you shot is also fine. I like the Victoria Secret sign in the background. Her dress color is very nice and it matches the color of the sign. I would much rather see her in a Victoria Secret lingerie though, to match the whole feel of the picture (of course not possible to put her in a lingerie in a public place).

Although all the technical stuff described above is important, the most important part should be the humanistic aspect of this picture. How is she portrayed. When I see this picture, will I like her, will I fall madly in love with her. That's the focus. Make her look irresistible, and make her look like every man's fantasy.

The main issue: model..... 面部表情生硬, 眼睛沒有靈魂。 Model 完全沒有進入情況。 也許她很緊張。 如果她的頭髮波浪一些然後加厚，她會看著好很多。她的妝應該化的更有戲劇性 (dramatic) to match her mini dress. This is an evening look, so the hair and make-up should match the evening feel (sassy and sexy).

I hope I haven't offended anybody by posting this.

看来这张照片要砸到Yuhong攒砖攒到房子造起来为止。

Okay Yu Hong.... in my opinion, you've done fine. Location is fine, your lighting is fine, and the colors are fine. The angle from which you shot is also fine. I like the Victoria Secret sign in the background. Her dress color is very nice and it matches the color of the sign. I would much rather see her in a Victoria Secret lingerie though, to match the whole feel of the picture (of course not possible to put her in a lingerie in a public place).

Although all the technical stuff described above is important, the most important part should be the humanistic aspect of this picture. How is she portrayed. When I see this picture, will I like her, will I fall madly in love with her. That's the focus. Make her look irresistible, and make her look like every man's fantasy.

The main issue: model..... 面部表情生硬, 眼睛沒有靈魂。 Model 完全沒有進入情況。 也許她很緊張。 如果她的頭髮波浪一些然後加厚，她會看著好很多。她的妝應該化的更有戲劇性 (dramatic) to match her mini dress. This is an evening look, so the hair and make-up should match the evening feel (sassy and sexy).

I hope I haven't offended anybody by posting this.

我看第一第二张怎么也要两个灯吧，还要大光圈镜头。

当天现场快二十个人，找个合适的机位都很难，更别说布灯，指导pose了。mm不进入状态我可以理解。